story builder 4. Must be done in script form.

Category: Game Parlor

Post 1 by the crashing machine (200) on Thursday, 27-Jan-2005 18:47:40

Ok, now here's story builder 4. Please note that this must be done in script form. I want to see how this will turn out, but not to have to convert it into a script form. this'll sve me the trouble of doing so.
If you are going to make this look gpood, do the following bits of html code to seperate lines and paragraphs. less br greater will create a

line break, and less p greater will create a

Post 2 by the crashing machine (200) on Thursday, 27-Jan-2005 18:55:51

The seen opens on a buissy sidewalk where Shaun is walking with his guide dog.

Post 3 by alison (my ISP would be out of business if it wasn't for this haven I live at) on Thursday, 27-Jan-2005 20:11:06

sean "what was I saying?" John "you were saying something about falling down a hole."

Post 4 by ItsAConspiraZ (This site is so "educational") on Thursday, 27-Jan-2005 21:05:26

John then spontaniously eats Sean. The end.

Post 5 by the crashing machine (200) on Thursday, 27-Jan-2005 21:49:25

Shaun (sighs): "I know I shouldn't have fed him so much Kibble this morning..."

Post 6 by Caitlin (I've now got the silver prolific poster award! wahoo!) on Friday, 28-Jan-2005 1:06:08

Shaun (belches, expeling Shaun from his stomach)
Shaun (stands up and dusts himself off) Bleh, you are sick, John! (laughs)

Post 7 by the crashing machine (200) on Friday, 28-Jan-2005 14:27:58

Ok, I think you meant to say John. Anyway, on with the story!

Post 8 by alison (my ISP would be out of business if it wasn't for this haven I live at) on Friday, 28-Jan-2005 18:55:14

john "um...remember we're in this really deep hole in the ground?" <P> Sean (downcast) "aww...yeah i remember...I could probably climb out, but I don't know about you." <P> John (puts his paws against the wall) "I'm going to try!"

Post 9 by the crashing machine (200) on Saturday, 29-Jan-2005 13:15:42

john trys to climb out, but slips and falls back down to the bottom of the whole.

Post 10 by Caitlin (I've now got the silver prolific poster award! wahoo!) on Saturday, 29-Jan-2005 15:06:11

Shaun: Sorry. I was only joking. Anyway, climb onto my back and I'll try to climb up with you on my back.
(John struggles onto Shaun's back and Shaun climbs out of the hole)
JOhn: We did it! Yayayaya!!!
(The two of them dance a jig on the edge of the hole and fall back in)
Shaun: Oh darn!

Post 11 by alison (my ISP would be out of business if it wasn't for this haven I live at) on Saturday, 29-Jan-2005 15:13:42

John "hey, your on my paw!" <P> Sean "sorry." (gets off John's paw) <P> Sean "ok, let's try it again."

Post 12 by the crashing machine (200) on Saturday, 29-Jan-2005 15:29:09

They try again and are successful.

Post 13 by alison (my ISP would be out of business if it wasn't for this haven I live at) on Saturday, 29-Jan-2005 15:31:18

"that guy's blind, he's going with no white stick, and he's carrying his guide dog!" (someone goes over to him and offers to help) <P> "This dog looks heavy, do you want help?

Post 14 by the crashing machine (200) on Saturday, 29-Jan-2005 15:32:41

They try again and are successful.

Post 15 by Caitlin (I've now got the silver prolific poster award! wahoo!) on Saturday, 29-Jan-2005 15:35:16

Woops double posting ah well!
Shaun: Sure. That'd be great.
(He and the girl shift John between them)
Shaun: WHat's your name?
Girl: It's Louise.
Shaun: Oh hi. You're a member of the zone, huh?
Louise: Yep! Nice to meet you!

Post 16 by alison (my ISP would be out of business if it wasn't for this haven I live at) on Saturday, 29-Jan-2005 15:41:36

Sean "you, too." <P> (john wimpers.) <P> Sean "where is the nearest vet?" <P> Louese "About two blocks away."

Post 17 by the crashing machine (200) on Saturday, 29-Jan-2005 18:23:15

Shaun (reliieved): "thank you, but if it's that far, I'll sure need help carrying him. C'mon."

Post 18 by alison (my ISP would be out of business if it wasn't for this haven I live at) on Saturday, 29-Jan-2005 19:33:01

receptionist "ok, sir, please take a seat." (points to a chair.) <P> sean (doesn't move) "where?" <P> receptionist "o, is that a seeing eye dog?" <P> John (whimper) <P> receptionist "ok, sir, come take my arm and I'll lead you to a room, we can examine him."

Post 19 by Caitlin (I've now got the silver prolific poster award! wahoo!) on Saturday, 29-Jan-2005 20:19:51

(Shaun follows the receptionist into a room where a unicorn is standing)
Shaun: Seria!
Seria: Hello again, Shaun. Now, whta seems to be the problem with dear John?